Diablo® III

Greetings,stranger I'm not surprised to see your kind here. This man in a blue outfit says to me i say hi and walk away before he can finish I'm looking for a cave i ask Kashya she tells me to talk to Akara i walk up to this lady in a tent and find this man there he has a weird look to him he has white hair and grim expression on his face.He looks at me and says you must be a sorceress people who are obsessed with find the pure way with Magic .I took that as an insult and responded what about you crazy dead zombie guy.Skeleton he corrects me anyway my name is Jerad.Well then ill be on my way i walk out to a bridge that long and there is water under it to find a bunch of dead creatures who could of slain these i ask myself. i walk up and see a zombie and think of Jared i bet he can mind control these things.Anyways i blast it with fire and it falls to the floor and drops gold.i race to pick it up but this girl with long blonde hair come up and picks it up i was mad but decided to drop it as i say hey what are you doing she say i am going to the cave would you like to join.Yes i guess we walk up and find 5 wandering fallen i cast volleys of fire bolts to find only 3 dead.Then i feel smarter because a learn a new spell known as ice bolt............this is it for now.

Could you capitalize your "I"s and double space between the period and the next sentence? Sorry, this is a bit hard to read. Otherwise, keep going!