I am sorry Nuke but this looks different then how you write, I can see the difference between you and Fantasy.
I write in "Chapters" but I usually only indicate the end of the first by stating "-End of Chapter One-" because I'm overly dramatic, and the first chapter is usually separated from the other parts of the story.
AH HA! IM NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO WRITES LIKE THIS
NOW I CAN SHOW MY FEINIMIES
What in the world is a Feinimies?
And was that an insult?
Clearly you fail to understand that I do not see Fantasy's writing as being similar to yours.