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Neither is Drake yet he's all commanding and authoritative. She has emotions and would be scared. Something just telling her to follow and breaking the thing... That would be... terrifying in a way.
Okay, was thinking she would recognize other people like her and would follow. Should I delete that part?
No, not exactly. I even posted that she was dragged by her brother as she pretty much clawed at the floor.
Okay. Am re-working it now and it feels much, much more organic
Done. Better?
Si, it has a... better feel with it. More interesting. Kinda shows the conflict that they are having.
Yeah, I am much happier with it as well

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