I'm really getting serious now! This is indeed the new title for my new story I'm going to construct similarly to how my original story was. I'm really looking forward to starting it as soon as my lore studies are done~! This time, there will not be derpy moments, not so much sudden change, and all-around less things that wouldn't hardly make sense~
I intend this to be entirely and utterly flawless~I'm going to ask you to be critical with me as soon as I start posting it as well.
-Pointing out Grammar Mistakes
-Pointing out things that make no damn sense
-Pointing out Lore Clashing (I will make up a few things with this story, but they will fit in with the Starcraft 2 lore better)
-Any additional Criticism you see wise to add
So please, help me along with this! If you guys like it and it starts getting as good as Story-Jay the Ghost, I'll seriously consider creating a website dedicated to my stories, :)
*EDIT* I've decided this is just my brainstorm thread/a place for you guys to give me tips, advice, and whatnot, :P
This time, I'd like to try and keep the actual story thread as clean as possible from side comments and whatnot, so people don't have to skip though comments to seek for new chapters like in Jay the Ghost.
ALSO~Check here for my reasons for doing this if still curious, http://us.battle.net/sc2/en/forum/topic/3123363601?page=23
It should me my newest post