StarCraft® II

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"You will have your chance when he finishes the test."
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"Observe young one and see what you can learn here."
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The man left alone in the room shifts in displeasure.
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"Live in darkness, find the light."
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I sit down and wait, playing with my knives.
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I take out my whetting stone and get to work.
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I awoken in a field, the skies gray and dreary.
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OOC: 10 sentences makes it hard to tell whose point of view it is. For now, Zarkun is A, the Templar is T and the main character is simply B.

Write it like this T: [Sentence]
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I insert my own person: Guider as G.

G: Flames encircle the man. "Can you feel and not touch?"
Edited by Thundercrash on 9/24/2012 5:17 PM PDT
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OOC: I approve, use that format so it will be easier to distinguish between characters as everything so far is dialogue driven.

B: "I feel the fiery lick of the flames grazing me."
Edited by smylez on 9/24/2012 5:17 PM PDT
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B: "A field?" I can't believe my eyes. How'd I arrive?

Hard to get that in ten words.
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09/24/2012 05:15 PMPosted by smylez
"I feel the fiery lick of the flames grazing me."


Follow your own advice. Who is that? Zarkun?
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I edited just now, brain fart it was only when I checked again that I realized.
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G: "Do not touch the fire, feel it. Can you feel?"
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B: I roam the field. I realize that Zarkun is gone.
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B: The flame limit my movement. "Yes I feel. It scorches."
Edited by smylez on 9/24/2012 5:24 PM PDT
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Wait. Thundercrash, is the flames encircling Zarkun who's in the room or the main character who's in the field?
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Main character.

G: The flames draw closer. "Then you do not feel them."
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The flames are encircling the main character. Zarkun's character is waiting in the room after the main character was teleported by the beam of blue light.

B: My thoughts race around me. What does this he mean?
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B: "Take them away!"
T: "Do they burn or not?"
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