Topic Let's Write A Story Together
Thecommander #731
Thecommander
B: "Remove this illusion. It can not hurt me. Next test."
Thundercrash #975
Thundercrash
G: The flames become real, then depart, leaving a harsh burn.
Thecommander #731
Thecommander
B: The flames burn me, but then they extinguish.
Thundercrash #975
Thundercrash
G: A figure appears in the air, like a heat distortion.
Thecommander #731
Thecommander
B: "You sent me here to test me, but now to torture?"
smylez #594
smylez
G: "You think too much. You concern yourself with the present..."
Thecommander #731
Thecommander
B: "Sorry I'm impatient. I just liked to be burned."
Thundercrash #975
Thundercrash
G: The figure raises something, like a sword, and stabs you.
Thecommander #731
Thecommander
B: "I told you, illusions won't affect me any more!"
Thundercrash #975
Thundercrash
G: "In that, you are very wrong." The wound begins bleeding.
Thecommander #731
Thecommander
B: "But I feel nothing! I-" I look up at him.
Thundercrash #975
Thundercrash
G: "Then you will die."
Thecommander #731
Thecommander
B: "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!"

OOC: What the hell are you talking about?
Thundercrash #975
Thundercrash
I'm just making stuff up that sounds good. Haven't you noticed?

I was drawing inspiration from a StarGate Atlantis episode. Shepard fights this phantom creature created by the fears of villagers. It may have only been an illusion, but he got seriously clawed.
Thecommander #731
Thecommander
This reminds me of the Star Trek episode in Voyager where they went into a realistic virtual reality and even though they couldn't get hurt, their minds made it so real that they would die from heart attacks to fear alone.
Thundercrash #975
Thundercrash
I think I saw that somewhere else. The Matrix, I think. Or something like it.
Thecommander #731
Thecommander
I guess.

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