StarCraft® II

The King of Pirates - Story

Posts: 4,863
Ok, few things to state. Very good segment by the way, I already like Luis.

1). I know that wasteland is just a figure of speak (Kinda) but the entire planet would be, essentially, a massive forest filled with any variety of genetically alter plants and animals, all of which would be aggressive to everything.

2). Planet name seems good to me, but they call their planet something else. The term they use is Erndaris (Err-an-dar-us).

3). Ok, serious question. How would a few ships scanning discover the social hierarchy of a race, especially since most of their leadership is underground, save for the Larval Queens?
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,953
Good, you(The reader) are suppose to like Luis. :)

1) Well, Okay. But it could still be a wasteland/forestry... Place... Just because there is a wasteland doesn't mean the whole planet is a wasteland. Thank you for pointing that out though.

2) Thank you, good to know.

3) It took them awhile, we're talking a few months for each planet to deep scan the thing. Not only that, but the Black Peace are suppose to have the most advanced technology from every race. The RP makes the BP look kinda retarded but... yeah...

Thank you for your feedback Jester! FINALLY some feedback!

Nukester, I have never even seen treasure island. It was a complete coincidence.
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,936
the Black Peace are suppose to have the most advanced technology from every race
error in this they have nothing from the Elerians, as only Kit and her AI Santar, would have access to the only two sources of Elerian tech. Anatoga and the NRR. though the tech isnt too much better than what the Black Peace have now anyway.
Edited by TheLostMorph on 11/29/2012 5:50 PM PST
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,953
Okay, Morph. I meant all the races that the Terrans even know about, lol.
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,936
i know :P just wanted to make sure though :P
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,953
Currently writing the next segment. What would you guys like to see?

-Captain Luis
-Lt. Scout's Dream's/history/memories whatever lol.
-Lt. Scout's life continued.
-The Separatist Council
-Thomas Brown
-Brian White.
-James Watkins
Edited by MarkusDaWise on 11/29/2012 6:21 PM PST
Reply Quote
Posts: 17,564
Maybe do a Captain Luis Flashback?

And it looks like I win again at tech :D
Lacerta and Candor... Good luck with that one due to the whole shell thingie plus they really don't have the tech on their own.

Aquila... Secretive like Black Peace.
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,953
I purposely didn't put Captain Luis Flashback on there -_- Lol...

I didn't because I want Captain Luis' take on it to be more illusive and secret. You(The Reader) Will find out later on when battles between Lt. Scout and Captain Luis become more frequent.

ooh, I added one.
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,936
hmmm .... ok sure whatever i just dont feel like getting into a tech war atm and kit could easily match anything now NRR + the entire data base from a Xel'naga ship ....
Reply Quote
Posts: 17,564
Never say never.

*Begins work on the schematics for the Geneva's*
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,953
"I dont wanna get in a tech war but... My tech is better..." Lol xD Just teasing. You never answered me, Morph...
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,936
about what u post next? i guess life o scout cont. ....
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,953
You never answered me either, CR.
Reply Quote
Posts: 17,564
Didn't know I was supposed to answer... I guess that makes sense.
Edited by CrymsonRaven on 11/29/2012 6:38 PM PST
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,953
Everyone is suppose to answer but... I was lucky to get one person to answer...
Reply Quote
Posts: 4,863
Lt. Scout's life.
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,953
Okay, I'll do Lt. Scout.

Who are your guys' favorite characters and why? If you don't have a favorite character that is actually more info then having one! I have found one of my biggest problems is making my characters unlikable by making them all the same. Any comments on that?
Edited by MarkusDaWise on 11/29/2012 6:51 PM PST
Reply Quote
Posts: 4,863
Like I said, I like Luis cause of the 'I'm the !@#$ing king of the universe' attitude, but I think that I might like Amber, just depends on how much you expand the characters.
Reply Quote
Posts: 7,936
^
Reply Quote

Please report any Code of Conduct violations, including:

Threats of violence. We take these seriously and will alert the proper authorities.

Posts containing personal information about other players. This includes physical addresses, e-mail addresses, phone numbers, and inappropriate photos and/or videos.

Harassing or discriminatory language. This will not be tolerated.

Forums Code of Conduct

Report Post # written by

Reason
Explain (256 characters max)
Submit Cancel

Reported!

[Close]