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Race Name: The Mures Humanoids
The race all started with experiments. The Confederates decided to start work on exotic animals that were small, but had the same type of brain chemistry with humans, in hopes of finding a way to increase the strength and intelligence of humans. They started with several litters of white mice. They implanted these mice with a drug that they made to increase size, and strength. They saw the mice growing to the size of a bobcat before they stopped growing. They implanted the next litter, which had the previous genes with more. They grew to the size of a tiger. The scientists were pleased. Next they implanted the mice with genes that they thought would increase intelligence. This worked too well. The mice already had small claws, but these increased in size as well. When the scientists next came they killed them, and escaped. The mice were quite intelligent, and soon the mice figured out how to work the Science Vessel they were on. They took it to an uninhabited planet and grew and grew. They grew bipedal and gained opposable thumbs from the need to adapt them. Soon they reverse engineered everything on the Science Vessel. Now they are as powerful as Terrans, and are something formidable, and are to be feared, except by reptile races and cat races, they still hold a fear of them.
"I was able to make a better race backstory out of white mice."
*Eye twitch* ........ no thumbs in feral form ....... *eye twitch*
and ......... if markus will allow it i am thinking of bringing the rest of the Elerian fleet to Sep space and thus opening them up for other's to use as available race in this ....... if i do .... gona wait till AFTER the council meeting where Kit finally shows her true form and the Elder council meets the Sep council .......... which will be after execrate .......
Edited by TheLostMorph on 12/18/2012 6:44 PM PST
After the battle for Execrate is over, i'm pretty sure I am going to close down this RP. It did not work how I had hoped. 8 threads exploded and left me with... Not good. I have learned from my mistakes and plan on putting much more thought into my next RP.
Listen, you're not hurting my feelings, I want you to give me all your criticism for not only my RP's, but myself. I am constantly trying to improve my RPing abilities and my personality. I know there are a few of you that would like to punch my head of for reasons I honestly don't know. Please, please, give me all the criticism you have, right now. Thank you.
Points on RP:
- I based the RP on a story I had already written, making flexability impossible.
- I didn't balance politics with action well enough, when it was action, people were bored, when it was politics, people were bored.
- I wasn't flexible enough. When people tried to introduce their ideas, it became near impossible to fit them into the story.
- (This one's debatable) It wasn't based off Starcraft Lore, creating lore conflicts too great to bare.
- Too many custom races. Too many immovable objects meeting unstoppable forces.
Points on Self-criticism:
Edited by MarkusDaWise on 12/20/2012 2:22 PM PST
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