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Darklight Chronicles PRP

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Name: Bianca “Vixen” Stride
Age: 14
Sex: Female
Aura Color: Yellow with Red Tint
Abilities: Breeze Channel (Increases her speed with the use of Aura. Meaning her strikes with the Machete will be much more lethal or she could use the extra speed with dodging or running.), Sucker Punch Flurry! (A series of quick, and generally painful; sucker punches that also catches the opponent off guard for another series of pain racking attacks and techniques.)
Armor: Kevlar, also wears a visor to help keep dust out of her eyes
Description: 5’ 6”. Seafoam green eyes. Mahogany red/brown hair. Caucasian; slightly pale. Hair style is that of a bob and a ponytail. Wears a bandanna around her neck; reminds her of the time of a sweeter and fun life. And a nasty looking scar on her left leg.
Summoned weapon(s): Machete
Backstory: She is your casual sit at home child. That was a lie. I fact, she had a carefree and adventurous life that got her into her fair share of trouble and scolding. One of these such things would be the occasional daredevil trick that could result and extreme physical and mental harm.
One day it really did change her attitude when Bianca got in a fight at school and ending up making a kid go blind by splashing something in the eyes. They were chemicals during a lab assignment in science class. She was expelled and went to the Alternative Center.
If only things could get any worse, they did. While taking a stroll in the woods back around from the house; something caught her fancy. Anything that took her mind off of what happened would feel better. Another lie was shrouded within the mind of this girl. Lying to her as the fate of destiny crept upon the young life.
The shriveled sounds was that of a young baby coyote. All alone by its lonesome. The mother was nowhere in sight and that was one grave mistake Bianca made when she got to close to the young pup. The mother came walking back; snarling. A mother was usually always protective of their young when in the wild.
Her leg was torn to shreds by the animal; muscles ripping and tearing. There was alone one thing left to do… Bianca picked up a nearby rock while panicking. In a split second it was all over. The blood everywhere.

Recruitment: Bianca was in maybe only one sport. And that sport was basketball. She would dribble the ball, run down the court, or fake the passing to another player. In one game she was giving off small streams of what appeared to be yellow off of the ball while toying with the other players, Though when she got aggressive with the ball, bits of yellow with a faint tint of red could be seen, but not by the naked eye. An official saw this and made the call. A day later their house was being visited by government officials; telling the parents about the bright future ahead for this young child. They declined the invitation as Bianca didn't need the help as she was happy without it. Some time later after the incidents and very shortly after the second one that involved the coyote, Bianca contacted the officials back since they gave the family their number if they ever wanted to change their mind.
Edited by CrymsonRaven on 8/19/2013 10:53 AM PDT
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Finished my app. Going for a sort of plotting, manipulative kind of character this time.

Name: Harrison Eltis
Age: 14
Aura Color: Blue, slight green tint
Abilities: Summon Sentinel (Summons a drone which follows mental commands. Fairly fast moving, but can be destroyed fairly easily. Armed with a 20 kW laser.), Envision (Highlights the location of all living creatures in an area. The size of the area affected depends on what level of concentration is possible.)
Armor: Black trench coat and pants over light kevlar armor. Provides a little protection against lower caliber pistol and rifle rounds, but anything more powerful than a .223 rifle round will be almost totally unaffected.
Description: 5' 8", very intense electric blue eyes. Paler than usual skin, as a result of little time spent outside. Slightly longer than usual straight black hair. Usually wears a set of dark glasses. Weaker than average and with a slight build, but very good with technology. He is very suspicious by nature, and as such most people avoid him, and he likes it that way.
Summoned weapon: Bolt action rifle with a 4x - 22x scope. Fires decently powerful 6mm rounds with very good accuracy and range.
Backstory: Though he never talks about himself unless absolutely necessary, Harrison is known to have always been a quiet and secretive person, with something about him that suggests he wants people to keep their distance, and that they would be wise to do so. The son of military researchers, he learned to be a very good programmer at a young age and helped the government without their knowledge via his parents, showing them programs and ideas he had created, which they would then present to their superiors as their own. Though he was never able to effectively build the things he designed, he would often spend hours writing and sketching out ideas for experimental weapons, a subject which had always interested him.

In school, Harrison was frequently bullied because of his lack of physical strength and tendency not to defend himself when attacked or threatened. However, it turned out that the only reason he didn't retaliate was because he lacked the ability to do so effectively until he discovered his aura. One day, Harrison was caught in an alleyway by a local gang. He allowed them to take his money, as he didn't want to make them any more violent than necessary, but when one of them decided to take his notebook and laptop as well, he lashed out at them. In a flash of blue light, a Sentinel drone, one of the concepts he had designed, appeared behind the gang and killed all of them nearly instantly.

He immediately went back home and continued as if nothing had happened, never speaking of the incident. However, he gradually began experimenting with his aura in his work, finding that he could use it to make things work which would otherwise be impossible. Because his parents worked so closely with the government, it wasn't long before his abilities were discovered and an agent came to his door, speaking to his parents about a special academy. Having never been especially close to his parents and having no friends to speak of, he gladly took the offer, leaving his home without a second thought.
Edited by Owlfeathers on 8/19/2013 1:23 PM PDT
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Seems most of the blues have a tendency to summon things...anyways, looks good you two, I'll get them added.
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^Dacder^
Name: Aaron Womack
Age: 13
Aura Color: Green
Abilities: Cloak- Causes himself or someone else around him to be temporarily invisible. Very draining on his strength and stamina.
Emergency Shield- Forms an impenetrable shield. Strength and duration depends on the effort put into it, the more effort used the more sapping it is.
Armor: Very think Kevlar with a heavy armored metal gas-mask. Allows little vision and mobility with extreme amounts of protection.
Description: 5‘2, 95 pounds, skinny but with some muscles. He has dark-brown eyes and black hair, with pale skin. He normally will wear T-shirts with shorts outside of combat or training, and in-combat has almost no part of his body visibly, as his black/red armor covers his entire body.
Summoned weapons: A rather large Light-Machine-Gun, not very effective for killing but very good at suppression. Limits his mobility further.
Backstory: Aaron grew up in a household with parents that were always there, but who never wanted to talk. He had nobody to really talk to as a child, and preferred the safety of his own mind as it was. His father was a successful businessman, and his mother was smart enough to homeschool him, which he was very much happy about. His parents decided that the academy was the best thing they could do for him once they found out about his talents, and so here he is. He is smart, and prefers slow-paced strategic battles.
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Right, so, Dac, fix the first ability. Greens focus on defense and or holding the line, so cloaking and stealth isn't a strong point. Seems good otherwise. And it's an LMG. It's gonna kill anything that gets in it's path. Also, based on your back story, he's more a blue then a green.
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the auras sound a lot like the mantra's from Hindu Mythology but meh i'll bite

Name: Alex Phenix

Age: 14

Aura Color: red

Abilities:
Blades of Vajra:
as Alex gets more enraged the number of katana's he summons increases until it reaches maximum which is 4. when at 3-4, blades hover in the air (1- normal, 2- angry, 3- enraged, 4- RAGE)

Fueled by Rage(passive): alex has increased strength which amplifies as his rage increases

Armor: trench coat worn over a Standard Kevlar suit

Description: Black hair, eyes with dark red iris that seemed to glow when he got angry, Medium build and average height

Summoned weapon(s):
katana - image: http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120315083042/elderscrolls/images/2/23/Ebonyblade.png

Backstory: Alex was one of those kids that really didn't fit into any niche and was quite feared at school. he looked calm and normal but was easily angered, getting into fights often. his parents found him as a hopeless cause, thinking him more of a hooligan more than anything else. they were successful and rich, having no time to deal with their son. once they figured out about his abilities they saw him as more of a freak then anything else so they sent him away to the academy to get rid of him, hoping to never see their lost cause ever again, just arriving as a nooby to the academy.
Edited by darkra on 9/23/2013 10:33 AM PDT
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NO classified backstories. These are kids, not seasoned combat vets working for SpecOps. Reds are generally more aggressive than most, even when calm. Wrath needs tweaked to be feesable. Unaffected by the weight? If you're wielding a blade the size of a bloody skyscraper, which wouldn't be allowed FYI, you're sure as hell gonna feel it. Even Superman feels the weight the bigger the object he's lifting. As such, you can do a single slice with a giant blade, but that's all I'll allow. Fueled by Rage also needs tweaked. Sure, you're an aura user, which makes you extraordinary, but you're also still human, meaning you've got the same limitations for the most part. Augmenting one of those aspects is fine, and then the angrier you get the more it's augmented is good, but all three augmented? It's more of a yellow ability then. Then your description is meant to be what you look like, not your personality. You wanna add that section in for your app, that's fine. And the sword is fine, just...be normal for once and call it a katana. That's what it is, no matter how "cool" it looks.
Edited by Zarkun on 9/21/2013 12:39 PM PDT
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k its all patched up hopefully
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quitE


Sorry, been here too long. Story works, eye colors need more description than red. Just sorta helps with mental visualization, cause red makes me think Chiss from TOR.
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k i changed it to red irises, everything else about the eyes are well... normal also changed fueled by rage's speed into strength
Edited by darkra on 9/22/2013 8:48 AM PDT
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Oh, I need if you're a nooby or a yearling.
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i put nooby
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Dacder
^Dacder^
Name: Aaron Womack
Age: 13
Aura Color: Green
Abilities: EMP Grenade: A thrown grenade which works in a similar fashion to the EMP ability in-game, temporarily disabling psionic-attacks.
Emergency Shield- Forms an impenetrable shield. Strength and duration depends on the effort put into it, the more effort used the more sapping it is.
Armor: Very thick Kevlar with a heavy armored metal gas-mask. Allows little vision and mobility with extreme amounts of protection.
Description: 5‘2, 95 pounds, skinny but with some muscles. He has dark-brown eyes and black hair, with pale skin. He normally will wear T-shirts with shorts outside of combat or training, and in-combat has almost no part of his body visibly, as his black/red armor covers his entire body.
Summoned weapons: A Riot Shield, made from virtually impenetrable materials which covers his entire body, heavy but also an effective blunt object. He also carries a very powerful but rather light pistol which lacks in range but makes up for in ease of carrying and power.
Backstory: Aaron grew up in a household with parents that were always there, but who never wanted to talk. He had nobody to really talk to as a child, and preferred the safety of his own mind as it was. His father was a successful businessman, and his mother was smart enough to homeschool him, which he was very much happy about. His parents decided that the academy was the best thing they could do for him once they found out about his talents, and so here he is. He is smart, and prefers slow-paced strategic battles.
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Still the back story issue, Dac. He sounds like a blue, not a green.
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zark so am i in?
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I'll get you added in later. Not doing much with DC right now.
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i was wondering would it be ok to replace aura edge with this?:

blades of vajra:
as Alex gets more enraged the number of katana's he summons increases until it reaches maximum which is 4. when at 3-4, blades hover in the air (1- normal, 2- angry, 3- enraged, 4- RAGE)
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I can assume you hold two, and the others float. Hmmmm.......seems alright.
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and how long would "later on" be just so i can get a sense of time of course, no rush
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