StarCraft Lore

Colossus

A short story by

Valerie Watrous

There was no way out. The screams made him certain of that. He could sense the dark templar huddled together in panic, their structure surrounded on all sides, but he was powerless to intervene. Their fear burned into his mind until his consciousness was pierced with it, each sensation bright and distinct before bleeding away into the abyss. He already knew how it would end. The machines were coming....

"Commander, we are reaching the borders of the security zone."

Aldrion's eyes snapped open, and after a moment's hesitation, the high templar collected his thoughts enough to return the pilot's message through the ship's communicator. "On my way, Zoraya."

He wondered why the alarm he'd set earlier hadn't roused him, even though he could feel its pulse resonating against his skin. The visions had been troublesome even before he had left Shakuras, and his current mission only seemed to add to their weight. But Executor Selendis had entrusted this decision to him after conversing with the Hierarchy. He would not disappoint his people.

Still deep in thought, he made his way from the small meditation chamber to the ship's bridge. The crew had already assembled—an unusual party consisting of two other Aiur warriors like him and a lone dark templar pilot. They were the only ones who could be spared, despite the fact that he scarcely knew them. Even the ship was unfamiliar; he merely recognized that it was of dark templar construction. He glanced up to survey the viewscreen.

"This area has not been patrolled for some time. We may encounter resistance," Aldrion warned. For the sake of the dark templar, he was obliged to use words in his psionic communications instead of conveying his emotions through the Khala. His Aiur brethren had long defined themselves by the mental connection that allowed them to convey their thoughts and feelings to one another effortlessly. Those who opposed the Khala, seeking to retain their individuality, had become exiles: the dark templar. Their long estrangement had ended when Aiur had fallen to the zerg some years ago, but the peace was a tenuous one.

Unlike many Aiur protoss of similar rank and experience, Aldrion did not mind accommodating the dark templar's foreign ways when the occasion called for it. With times like these, he no longer had the luxury of intolerance. Still, he could always sense the barriers within the minds of the dark templar, even as he reached out to touch their thoughts. They seemed cold.

"Activate the cloaking field," he ordered. Zoraya gratified him with a short affirmative. The dark templar were not known for being verbose.

There was a low hum, and the interior lights dimmed as the pilot skillfully manipulated the ship's energy resources to hide its presence. Any viewers outside the ship would have sworn it had melted into the starry expanse.

"Do not be concerned, Commander." Telbrus, the second-in-command, turned to him from across the bridge. "The Aiur protoss do not need to hide in the shadows to fight!"

"Surely, your Aurigan kin have honored us too graciously by sparing you, Telbrus," Aldrion replied dryly, surveying his hulking companion with a hint of mirth. In many ways Telbrus was emblematic of his relatives—strong, brave, and a bit too proud. "But we must not betray our mission with any unnecessary displays of combat."

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Erdlyea #325
Erdlyea
4/22/2012
Next protoss lore should be something like about archon or something
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Leith #630
Leith
3/30/2012
Aldrion knows how to kite.
Good story by the way - turned out really good from the vision part until the end.
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Goodbye #153
Goodbye
2/17/2012
Really good story, well worth the read!
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darkra #350
darkra
11/14/2011
i enjoyed all the short stories and feel more connected with each race:
the honour and knowledge of the protoss
the fury and malice of the zerg
and respect for what the terrans had to go through
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ArcticShogun #467
ArcticShogun
10/26/2011
Dont care for the length of this story and it seems to like an testament to the colossus' might decent though all in all
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mowlord #711
mowlord
10/24/2011
SHORT! THIS IS LONGER THAN THE STORY SO FAR!!!!!!!
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cRsPartyToss #373
cRsPartyToss
8/23/2011
o lol I thought it was 1 page not 10 out of 10, i dont have time, il come back when i do though :D
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supersmash #567
supersmash
8/12/2011
WIN
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Teru #560
Teru
7/30/2011
the baneling story is really good... highly recommend it
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Torantolis #888
Torantolis
7/14/2011
So I have read alll of the short stories and loved them. My question is, are these only from contests or can I submit one of my own for review? I have searched the Blizzard website and Battle.net from top to bottom repeatedly. Is there any way?
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DanielD #661
DanielD
6/30/2011
awesome story
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LittleNicky #367
LittleNicky
6/24/2011
saying a unit is op is saying i dont know how to play this game.... the collosus can be targeted by everything so there going to be devasting against everything ground
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Silence #583
Silence
6/15/2011
I wonder where I can submit my own short story... Hmmmm....
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Silence #583
Silence
6/15/2011
Darsiris definitely likes Zoraya.
Also, is there ANY way to change servers? I'm in US, but supposed to be in EU and want to change to EU.
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Zolo #816
Zolo
6/6/2011
Kiseitai i know what you mean but that's actually what blizzard kind of wants to do. Otherwise why would they make colossus tall enough to be attacked by anti air only units like corrupters or the terran aa tower but cant attack back? So it wouldn't matter if zerg got new air units like scourge, this just makes sure the colossus isn't OP, and that's why all good protoss players always have backup for there colossus.
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trip #676
trip
6/4/2011
the ship is a dark templar ship so i assume after playing single player prophecy mission, that the ship is similar to one in the missions.
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Kiseitai #415
Kiseitai
5/28/2011
Here's what I don't get. Supposing the colossus was "OP," it was meant to be a devastating machine in its design specifications. In fact, most of the protoss units were designed to be expensive, hard to mass without hurting the economy and powerful. So, wouldn't it be contradictory to nerf units that Blizzard designed to be strong? I feel the zerg just needs a unit like the scourge to take down the colossi quick like the banelings do to the marines. Then again, protoss players would feel cheated for losing costly units fast.
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Iliya #871
Iliya
5/27/2011
Good story.

And for those who want a 'tl;dr', just grow a pair and read it. It's only ten pages. TEN PAGES. It'll take you maybe ten minutes, fifteen at max, to read it.
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Mysticalmeow #826
Mysticalmeow
5/22/2011
COLOSSI ARE NOT OP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Daemonflame #240
Daemonflame
5/18/2011
What I really want to know is what kind of ship they were piloting. Would be kinda cool to see this in the expansions. Sure doesn't sound like the void ray though.
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Animus #742
Animus
5/25/2011
@Daemonflame: I'm thinking it might be a ship sort of like the one Zeratul has/uses in the cutscenes of the Prophecy missions....(in the campaign, for those oblivious to the finer points of Single Player). I think his/that ship was called The Void Seeker....
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LittleNicky #367
LittleNicky
6/24/2011
@Daemonflame: when i read this because of the cloaking the arbitor ship from star craft brood war came to mind
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DrewRho #752
DrewRho
7/31/2011
@LittleNicky: arbiters cloak other ships, they can't cloak themselves
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JacobRee #816
JacobRee
1/29/2012
@Daemonflame: i imagined something along the lines of a carrier
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vacagodx #422
vacagodx
5/15/2011
oh noes, another unit that people think are OP, what next, zerglings early game are OP? no duh, if your opponent plays well, anything can be "OP". If you suck, OP is just another excuse.
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FLIght #314
FLIght
5/11/2011
I hate colussus!
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RedWing #811
RedWing
5/10/2011
cool story. nuff said.
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Jester #1170
Jester
5/9/2011
OP TOSS. just kidding :D
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shamation #523
shamation
5/9/2011
colossus suck against corrupters, pheonixs and vikings or anything air
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Savagescream #299
Savagescream
5/9/2011
@shamation: no @##%ing %*** sherlock
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nYqSherlock #435
nYqSherlock
5/10/2011
@Savagescream: It's elementary :D
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hasaboo #374
hasaboo
5/8/2011
The colossus, mighty, but so frikin overpowered!!
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PancakeMix #642
PancakeMix
5/13/2011
@hasaboo: How can you call something OP when it requires 2 buildings and all that gas worth of tech. mighty, but takes so much to get
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DarkNexus #177
DarkNexus
5/8/2011
I have been a Dark Templar since Aiur was even being processed in the universe. One of the first
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DarkNexus #177
DarkNexus
5/8/2011
The Dark Void shall protect our dark templar people...
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OVERMIND #171
OVERMIND
5/7/2011
So they are basically machine golems that kill what ever is considered the enemy. Killing efficiently and brutally like a machine. No wonder they hid them so they wouldn't be used against other protoss. Protoss are kinda all about honor, martyrdom and automated killing machines kinda throw that out the window.
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OVERMIND #171
OVERMIND
5/7/2011
@OVERMIND: throws*
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Notzerg #341
Notzerg
6/2/2011
@OVERMIND: I thought reavers were unmanned killing machines.
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Fenix #574
Fenix
6/13/2011
@Notzerg: The Reavers were originally mining machines refitted for battle, if I rememeber right. The Colossus, though, were nothing but war machines.
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Destructor #409
Destructor
7/17/2011
@Fenix: I hope they bring back Reavers in LotV