First, let me say, I LOVE THIS NEW STORYTELLING. I didn't see the end of cata, so I can't comment on that, but as compared to everything I have experienced in WoW (and I've been there since the beginning), this ranks up there. The way that scenarios can be replayed and enjoyed, the immersive elements of the story, the solo time with heroes of races (and heroes are SOOO important, and need to be played up more) is simply great.
So two thumbs and a toe up to your efforts, keep up the good work.
Now, as to a very minor issue.
You have some grammar errors, I'm pretty sure: "...I have any right to try force the..." s/b "...I have any right to try to force the..." In addition, later on (not in the quest text, a certain NPC /says to you after completing the de-subjugating quest) it says.... "Please, XXXX, do not tell with..." and s/b "Please, XXXX, do not tell..." (remove with)
Edited by Meshach on 12/12/2012 11:40 PM PST