Ro, give yours 8/10. Like it overall. Tunic really works with that look. Only thing distracting are the boots. The rest of the ensemble is concealing, and you see fleshy ankles... Kind of brings my attention back to the feet.
I know. I went through the model viewer boot by boot through EVERY leather boot they had and nothing seemed to fit right :( Colors just don't lend to that set at all. I tried the boots that are with the same set as the helm I used, but they seemed off.
I will say, you get my 8/10. I have always loved the corsetted look of the Tier 9 rogue set. One suggestion I have would be to try the dark shoulders and legs from the Discovery set (http://www.wowhead.com/transmog-set=1078). I found that they went really well with that top.
But you work it nonetheless.