"Mary the Penguin," written by me.

I have written my first children's book. It's a bedtime story book, which is basically a children's classic picture book without pictures. It is meant for parents to be able to read to children at bedtime.

A lot of parents are preferring these books over picture books for bedtime reading so that their kids aren't too distracted by pictures and, thus, can simply listen to the story and use their imagination.

The book, "Mary the Penguin," is a short story about a girl, named Mia, who finds Mary, lost in the woods, on the top of a hill. Mia faces the task of helping Mary get home, to the South Pole, but quickly realizes that the South Pole is very far away.

You can download the book, for free, for kindle on amazon at: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00BSJYIMI

Please download and let me know what you think. The free promotional period only lasts five days, so I am trying to get as many people to download it as possible. Amazon won't let me give the book away for more than five days, so I'm trying to reach as many people as possible.

I'm looking for criticism. Negative, mainly, because all I have received is positive, and I need to hear some negative feedback. Please give me your honest opinion. Don't hold back.

Thank you!
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