Catastrophe, WoW: Cataclysm Fanfic

90 Worgen Warrior
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Back in my day I think 'adult' art wasn't even welcome on DA.

Mm. I've only been using it for about two years now. And I really didn't use it much at all for the first year.
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90 Night Elf Druid
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I haven't logged in for over two years, but my pagething says I joined 10 years ago. I feel old. >.<
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100 Pandaren Monk
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Well, Fang, I did take a break from power-gearing my Shammy to finally finish this.

You've gotten my feedback on the more imminent mistakes I spotted.

As for the rest, I loved it. Though, I personally did find the partcular mini-section focussing on Raindancer's Betrayal was very fast. It shot by quite quickly, but then that's a personal stylistic issue, and not really anything wrong haha. It was also prolly for effect, I'm just a little out of practice with reading....well, anything.

Your style I can see developing in there and it's looking good. I can see the family genes coming out a lot :P

I haven't read it to critique it just yet, but it was enjoyable. And well written. Keep practicing, and keep it up! You're doing well. :)
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