Apart from the song being repetitive, the random voices are out of context in terms that they basically screech the melodic line. The voices should be the beginning and the music should follow or at least during the music part the voices should be cropped or something to not give the impression of them just being there for that sake.
And yes as "taste" is supposedly universal, there is also criticism to go with it, a thing kids would not have experience to understand. To be precise: 1.do not say a song is trash because you don't like it and 2.do not say a song is good just because you like it.