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Yeeeeeeesss...
"And there is always the interference of a third person in that aspect."
So? I thought Shadow was going to die. Nothing wrong with that prediction. Such things often occur in stories.
"Yes, she was going to kill of one of the main characters before the story was at the near absolute end."
I don't think we'll worry about main character death for at least a while yet, :P (And it depends on whom you consider a main/important character) So, I'll get typing, and do stuff, :3

I'm also planning a new story just based off ideas i've been getting these days. It'll be someting like a fantasy story, and I'll be posting it on deviant art when I have the general first chapter done, :)
Copy and paste it here when it is up on DA? Also, do you know if HBRB is coming back to these forums? I know you have a mean of communicating with him.

Thanks and continue to write!
I wish my writing was good >.> You are so good at this, Mockingjay :3 I hope you continue to produce wonderful works of literature :D
Mockingjay I have to agree with Nikola you're writing is amazing and I hope you have a successful life with writing..I mean if you want to...
We'll have to see~idk what I want to do with my life yet, :P

oh! and EPIC NOTE~people have been giving me crap about using hyphens in stupid places and I've started to notice that if people read it like it were a regular hyphen, it sounds really weird. I've mistaken using a hyphen like a pause or the sort of quick sentence change or ...idk. I hope you guys ignore the semi-random hyphens! xD

Gawd i hate it when i do stuff like that, I was subconciously thinking people would read them as spaces/pauses in sentance like I do and word-extensions when they're being used as such, >_<
XD I do the same thing, except I abuse commas, semi-colons, and the enter key. It makes my writing really weird too :D I read them as spaces, but I can never actually use paragraphs properly :P
Random hyphens- used by all of the Bar! XD
If anything, use commas as brief pauses in your writing, those are at least accepted by some to be usable for that purpose (I tend to overuse them though).
08/03/2012 01:05 PMPosted by ShadowFury
"Yes, she was going to kill of one of the main characters before the story was at the near absolute end."


The Princess Bride... but I guess he does turn out to be alive later.
I saw "plot twist" before I read the chapter... and went through the whole thing thinkin NOOO SHADOW'S GOING TO DIIIIIIIEEEEEE!"

How could you do that to me -_-


If you are in the know, you know that Shadow is indeed going to die. Rather suddenly and pointlessly.

But there is allways another love intrest right around the corner. Right Jay? ;)
Darnit Zanon, you spoiler you.
Come to think of it, I heard that Shadow dies... during Cloaked Love, correct? Someone (Thundercrash) randomly killed him off I believe.
Not quite. As I remember it, Gabriel blew something up, and Jay informed him that the explosion had killed shadow.

08/06/2012 08:37 PMPosted by Zarkun
Darnit Zanon, you spoiler you.

Read the first cloaked love. -Don't forget the preamble-
I never should've stopped reading this forum...I've missed so much!

08/05/2012 08:45 AMPosted by Mockingjay
oh! and EPIC NOTE~people have been giving me crap about using hyphens in stupid places and I've started to notice that if people read it like it were a regular hyphen, it sounds really weird. I've mistaken using a hyphen like a pause or the sort of quick sentence change or ...idk. I hope you guys ignore the semi-random hyphens! xD


I do this too. Some people will see it as stylistic, and others will think it's stupid. If you like it as an element that defines your writing, I'd say keep it. (if you've read All the Pretty Horses, you'll know about liberal abuse of grammatical rules...)

Also, hi. I haven't met many of you.
I never should've stopped reading this forum...I've missed so much!

oh! and EPIC NOTE~people have been giving me crap about using hyphens in stupid places and I've started to notice that if people read it like it were a regular hyphen, it sounds really weird. I've mistaken using a hyphen like a pause or the sort of quick sentence change or ...idk. I hope you guys ignore the semi-random hyphens! xD


I do this too. Some people will see it as stylistic, and others will think it's stupid. If you like it as an element that defines your writing, I'd say keep it. (if you've read All the Pretty Horses, you'll know about liberal abuse of grammatical rules...)

Also, hi. I haven't met many of you.
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Joking, I really don't know you.
*extends right hand* Hello. I am Draconus, the order-bringer around here.

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