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Howdy, fellas!

It's been awhile since I've written a Starcraft based story, so I thought I'd give it a shot. I've written several stories that I haven't even bothered to post, so needless to say, I've greatly improved since the disaster of Devroy Manufacturing. Even the redone version makes me gag when I read it.

Anyways, I'd really appreciate it if you guys gave this a once-over. Your approval means a lot to me and I am confident I could be a very successful writer if you guys would just throw me a bone every once in awhile.

Oh- and one more thing. If a better title comes to mind, please share :P


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